one can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar!!

life is like mail.. sometimes u just don get it.. sometimes u just aint happy with it... but its just the hope of a beautiful one that fuels u.. and for all the pains, tears and rues, i believe 'always the juice is worth the squeeze'!! its just a short voyage and have fallen in love with the wild waters.. alles gute!!

Monday, June 26, 2006

A son…




Mother and ‘son’ played-

With the dying rays of the afternoon sun,
With the harmless waves on the sandy shore.
An oceanic zephyr conspire in their ears, as they ran-
Touch and go…catch me if you can!

Peels of laughter- sound of music
Gurgle of waves the background score
Wet footprints on the sands of time
Hurriedly erased by the waters ashore

Emotions perfume the air around
Blissful pain, it fills my soul
The distant palm sways to the wind
A ‘Laughter’s’ resonance continues to roll

What is love and what it yields?
Equations of life unbalanced remain
Woman and child though a universe form-
Still voids of life clog my brain.

Lady in white, in holy matrimony
Years ago a journey begun,
But the birth of love washed away
As nature’s fury hath its say

The search goes on, the emotions flow
Like waters of the bay from distant lands
With open arms she smiles in pain
Spreading her love…

And I stare at her with the sun on my back
Mother’s love for a boy unknown-
As nature stole our love from us,
Giveth many for love to reckon.



10 Comments:

At 7:37 AM, Blogger suraj sharma said...

nice poem, and thanks for visiting my blog. :)

 
At 12:02 PM, Blogger Purely Narcotic said...

Nice poem:)

 
At 5:28 AM, Blogger San said...

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At 5:30 AM, Blogger San said...

This is classy stuff!
But am confused what pain is the mother bearin?
Is it the seperation from her son? Troubled Marriage is it?

I loved the first few paras -
Lines like -
"The distant palm sways to the wind
A ‘Laughter’s’ resonance continues to roll" and
"An oceanic zephyr conspire in their ears, as they ran-
Touch and go…catch me if you can!"
captivate me, bring an animated vision, very life-like basically. Can almost feel the emotions..
So cheers pal awesome stuf!!

 
At 8:30 AM, Blogger der Bergwind said...

@san..

ya, its like... the mother has lost her son to the seaz only... sumthingz like the wild waterz..
but she comes bac to shorez.. n she spreadz the love around.. in all of 'em she meetz on teh sandy shorez...

and 'i' in the poem wud me the husband.. the father who lost his son as well.. watches how a mother lives thru.. coz love never dies ..
thankz for liking it...

 
At 1:02 PM, Blogger Neha said...

hmm nice :-)

i like ur blog.. uv a got a lot of interesting posts.. the one on women in the army was interesting..

 
At 8:01 PM, Blogger der Bergwind said...

thankz neha..
a country where women n their wayz are just plastered all over the place... dunno whoz to blame, just tat wish life wud be a little more vibrant:)
if only wordz were really poignant weaponz.. kash..

 
At 3:05 AM, Blogger Ekta said...

wow,
Very different theme and guess summarises the emotion of motherhood beautifully!

 
At 11:41 PM, Blogger Anand said...

Hey,
Came in ur blog thru Ekta's and its probably the first time have read a post on a mother child relationship!
Its really touching...very nice post!

 
At 1:00 AM, Blogger Kaveetaa Kaul said...

A sensitive heart alongside a longing in the soul..lethal combination. Loved it. Am linking you to my blog:)

 

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