one can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar!!

life is like mail.. sometimes u just don get it.. sometimes u just aint happy with it... but its just the hope of a beautiful one that fuels u.. and for all the pains, tears and rues, i believe 'always the juice is worth the squeeze'!! its just a short voyage and have fallen in love with the wild waters.. alles gute!!

Thursday, November 16, 2006

Just 26 pieces

Grey translucent plastic made thee box
Of circular profile with a black lid tight
Lurking inside some ‘colorful shadows’

Unsure hands in giggles delight
Let the little plastics strewn afloor
Then in sudden silence stared at ‘em!

Crazy patterns, arranged- disarranged
Shouts in glee, little toothless wonder
Syllables pour, broken, like pearls from a necklace thread…

Finger pointed as mamma taught-
A… B… Eeee, then ‘O’- lips drawn close ‘n eyes bulge!
‘Mum… Mum’ with M- the umbilicus of life

In mind, her thoughts, waves of rhyme ripple
Like colors of life slow a rainbow form…
And letters of existence on her mindscape arrange

Letters, the words, the slaves of burden!
Of thoughts, of dreams, demands and prayers
But in a child innocent… abstract lie

Or is it some lullaby, some mantra to change-
The maladies that clout existence ahead?
The broken syllabi of a virgin soul

We never know the abstract words,
The touch of letters, of shapes anointed with sounds-
As a child feels the pulse of life.

In time the matrix arranges itself- articulate
She learns the wisdom that blesseth the race
No longer remain that magic of colors in her plastic box

Words, the letters- team twenty six
Paint us in colors as the years add on-
As life moves on the sledge of time

That had begun around a translucent box
Expires some day with those letters arranged-
The tomb stone regards or maybe newsprint memoir!

Only words remain in the journey of life
All grammar bound- worldly wise!
As…from those strewn pieces she creates seasons in the sun!!

Behold! All puzzles of this planet made of just 26 pieces…

7 Comments:

At 12:54 AM, Blogger Neer said...

very different! very catchy!! quite cool! :) heyyy, thank you!

 
At 2:27 AM, Blogger Kaveetaa Kaul said...

That was truly brilliant..one of your best if not 'The' best.

You are not bound by the confines of 26 alphabets.You have managed to paint a picture with the brush of words.

As for me..loss of words..keep it up.

 
At 4:27 AM, Blogger sanjay jha said...

nameste saptarashi
loved the post...A B C 's of life
cheers
jhaji.

 
At 3:31 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

very well written, the juxtaposition of the theme with the elements of life in general is drawn out well.
loved it!

 
At 8:36 PM, Blogger Somya said...

aweinspiring...u weaved the truth of life in the most wonderful manner, the loss of innocence and the capability of looking at things beyond the words that confine them, couldn't have been expressed in a better manner.

 
At 3:21 AM, Blogger shrivridhi said...

great...have felt this but could never have put it the way u did..

 
At 9:26 PM, Blogger der Bergwind said...

@ neers...

all ur posts have this 'different' shade... the pointaview.. may have rudbbed off from ur blog..

@kaveetaa..
the complete lady :) thankz for everything..

@jhaji..
nice to see a new beginning buddy.. do read n write regular now..

@raghav
boy! ur lovez infectious :)

@ somya...
thanku.. its words that mean everything.. coz they mean wat i say.. kinda simple, but distant naa?

@shrivridhi..
footprints on the sandz of time.. welcome :)
just say it, if u wanna say.. write it if u feel it coz... these aint up for judgements.. lifez nuances r best wen u live them everyday- tooth n nail, joy or sorrow... again my habit of gyan naa!!!

thankz all for believin in the 26 pieces of life!!

 

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