55
read Vinnie's 55's and wanted to write one! Din know how to be economical with words 'n thoughts... or maybe there wasnt room enough for a economy class air-fare types story... these words mean any to you.. maybe there's some story, maybe there's none, or maybe just a possibility that there was... when one turns the page :)
quite insane, but such is life... and i fire-fight :)
She
He
Acquaintance
Conversation
Speak
Listen
Smile
Laugh
Exclaim
Confirm
Contest
Create
Silence
Time
Seasons
Story
Vintage
Emotion
Confusion
Confession
Affirmation
Bliss
Magic
Open
Honest
Moment
Cross-road
Diverge
Travelogues?
Epilogues.
Past
Precious
Questions
Silence
Reason
Reflections
Refractions
Bounced
Opaque
Pain
Rain
Music
Harmony
Poetry
Wordsworth
Story
Ending
Success
Failure
Meaningless
Strange
Precious
Continuous
Treasure
Strength?
Labels: quality of mercy is twice blesseth. it blesseth him that gives and him that takes
posted by der Bergwind @ 11:27 AM
6 Comments:
hehehhehee....u betetr copyright this style....its the uniquest 55 fiction ever!
i loved the silence coming every now n then..so refreshing in a relationship!
//Travelogues?
Epilogues.// this was funny :)
the title n the label...both r so u:)
the ending with 'Strength?' is an open-ended view left to readers..i like that!
personally, i feel every relationship is strengthening!
thanks for not going too tangent!
@ vinnie
thanks for the generous comment.. i mean, i was laughing in a very weird way when i clicked on the 'post' button! i must have deleted a dozen efforst before doing this 'do'! anyway, ya.. words do mean a lot where sentences fear to tread :) travelogues generally don have epilogues, but ya... one wud know why sometimes there are some.
n ya, not to be too rude to the 'gawd of small things', of life etc. etc. i seek mercy.. for i know not why i sin :)
thanks for the comment - this one was one helluva "creation" (!) in many ways :)
well, i dunno what all transpired within u to finally come out with this piece but it is unique n worth reading!!
i want u to return the favor btw, pls read my previous story titled 'hope against hope'. dont shower with praises..i would prefer a strong literary feedback from ur angle...n pls keep it very very simple language, my IQ is <20 :) thanks buddy!!
thanks for that..i guess u tried ur best to lower the IQ...anyways, if that fiction made sense to u, then i must have written well:)
@ vinnie
i guess it was again the tangent run :) nehi... but ya, it made sense to me... and i quite agree with the theme, so.. the audacity of hope, as obama says.. rather, the audacity of dope, still is in the air!!
Wow. A bold way to use the 55 fiction format. A word paints a thousand pictures and I see you used your Quota to the max effect. :)
Cheers,
Velu
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