Come Feel The Rain
Run for your life...
There is no way out - from my constant memory
A garden frozen in time
Just the final word... life rendered abuse
Come feel the rain...
You smile the way, it aches!
As you turn back on the one way street
Come feel the rain -
Dont walk away,
Dont look away
Lady just that once -
Know your life
Come feel the rain
Where she never moves
When he calls the world
What they only observe!
In time-less time... Oh
Come feel the rain....
Labels: it pours, It rains not
posted by der Bergwind @ 11:03 AM
10 Comments:
Nice...I could actually read this poem and imagine music accompanying it.
It's raining right this instant. Now I want to go dance in it.
I'd probably catch pneumonia.
Either way, I love this
ryn: good to hear from you again!! Long time no read! lol. I look forward to reading something new (hint hint lol)
its been a long time my friend...
why did we lose touch...feels good to be back with your words
Interesting read and thank you for stopping by!
hmmmm, some imagination at work here...come feel the lines - they r surreal..well, almost !
@ nikki..
a thankz back for the stop over...
@ vinnie.. come feel the lines? wasnt quite the expression.. din get what you meant..
@ shadow lor..
sometimes a scribble gets larger than life n u don have the weapons to pen it down.. still trying to use the 26, in better capacity!
@raghav...
here n now... thatz what is important mate! but ya, did miss the gunshots - hard hitting!!
How i crave for rain..
Write poetry
:)
what i meant was - these lines brought about 'feelings'!
i liked it...i had wanted to write something similar...just waiting for the right time...
great job
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