one can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar!!

life is like mail.. sometimes u just don get it.. sometimes u just aint happy with it... but its just the hope of a beautiful one that fuels u.. and for all the pains, tears and rues, i believe 'always the juice is worth the squeeze'!! its just a short voyage and have fallen in love with the wild waters.. alles gute!!

Wednesday, November 29, 2006

hey Jude.... take a sad song n make it better...

Take a sad song and make it better…
Hey Jude… take a sad song and make it better-



The clouds conspire as a rumble rolls across-
Tapestry enclosing the rhythms of life.
Airs around in sudden urgency
As elements of earth anoint thy self

She’s going away without a try
Without a tear, hug hold heal-
Without a word, without a chance-
Without the love or dreams desire.

Hey Jude, don’t give it up!
The chords of life on your fingers play
Friend you are of another time-
Don’t leave me at the end of day

With the suns and moons, life hath changed
Some grown, some return to innocence did
The songs of life did transform around
Still unmatched remain, Jude, those unspoken words timeless bound!

Nature rolls over or is it the storm inside?
Sinusoids of existence riding high-
The sad song still comfortably numb!
Alone I stand with the broken threads- the soulful symphony!

You take my song, the sad song I have
Your magic wand- better you make-
The precious moments now tucked in time-
Don’t let the changes take my breath away…

Jude… without you it’s a sad song-
With you I never had a chance
Only in dreams did it divine seem
The mystery of life in myriad hues-

Like a magic portion, the tales of yester years
You played the Piper for the soul entrapped
Now you’re gone with the songs of yore-
Muses remain afloat inside… like times before.

The sad songs and happy ones alone I ride
But selfish me, in times ‘o pain-
Look back in the pages of music- Jude,
To take my sad song and make it better… again…

8 Comments:

At 9:01 AM, Blogger shrivridhi said...

some sad songs just stay sad....but then they are the sad ones..but they too have music...so lets enjoy those rythyms..
others are the louder ones...made better in flashes..moments of happiness...

u made it better than the beatles wizard...

 
At 1:24 AM, Blogger Somya said...

well I don't really have words to appreciate it...just too good..I really wish I could write like u but no matter how hard I try the outcome is something similar to a nursery rhyme. Arti honrao and u should seriously consider getting ur compilation of poems published.

 
At 8:48 AM, Blogger Arti Honrao said...

Lovely words!
Now I know why you liked me blog :)
Good people see good things in others!


Happy scribbling to you too
GBU
Arti

 
At 8:51 AM, Blogger Arti Honrao said...

@Somya ... thanks gurl ... am honored [and flattered too :)]

 
At 7:24 AM, Blogger der Bergwind said...

@ shrivridhi..
true! some blacks never get washed away.. n hey! don ever try the tears to wash them off.. increases the pain :)

@ somya..
u really are a writers delight! thanks all the way lady.. dunno whic is better the feelings or the wordz.. bus.. keep trying my best!

@ arti..
hey.. come on.. ur too gud re! n u have writings in print.. thatz great!!

 
At 1:16 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

u da man !
no better feeling than to take the pain and make it immortal (not that pain ever dies) by putting some rhyme into it

 
At 6:15 AM, Blogger Neer said...

dont let her go...

 
At 5:35 AM, Blogger der Bergwind said...

thankx all for clapping to the wordz play :) bow to thee..

@ neers...

sometimes u just have to let her go... coz u realise it aint matter anymore n therez nothing called true love :)) that u lived a life of perception error... laugh, u cry.. then u just have the sad song.. aint noone can make it any better:))

 

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